Anahera's Amazing Story

Sunset Primary School

Anahera's Amazing Story

22/6/2017

Whaea Wendy

26/6/2017 10:17:28 am

I really enjoyed reading this story Anahera.

You have used awesome language to describe the scenes and emotions in your story.

Can't wait to see what you'll write next.

Matua Eruera

26/6/2017 12:44:24 pm

What an amazing story, I felt excited as if i was in the story, you have an amazing imagination. You need to be in the Rumaki class

Whaea Darshna

26/6/2017 02:02:55 pm

WOW! What an awesome story Anahera! Room 4 were dead silent as I read this to them and were super intrigued as to what was going to happen next! What a well written story!

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4/7/2017 10:45:58 am

I love this story Anahera. I wish I could write as good as you

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